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A small public service announcement from the Department of Things That You Should Know…
It has not “peeked” your interest.
Nor has it “peaked” your interest.
…It has piqued your interest.
You are not “phased” by something.
You are fazed by it.
If you’ve had a long day, you are weary.
If you suspect someone is an idiot, you are wary.
It is “due course”, not “do course”.
“Per se”, not “per say”.
And while we’re here, it’s “could have”, not “could of”, but that particular battle may already be lost.
Thank you for your attention during this brief outbreak of grammatical housekeeping.
This has been a @LairdofthManor announcement.🎩💙
Sarah Turner retweeted
It’s “unkempt”, not “unkept”
It’s “piqued” your interest, not “peaked” your interest
It’s “a part of” or “apart from”, not “apart of”
It’s “to each his own”, not “to each is own”
It’s “moot” point, not “mute” point
Sarah Turner retweeted
Effective copywriting is all about tapping into people’s emotions.
Once you understand what makes them tick, you can craft compelling copy that drives them to action.
As a “cheat sheet,” Clayton Makepeace developed a system of 16 “dominant emotions.”
Here’s how to use them:
Sarah Turner retweeted
I really like this.
@KelloggCompany work by @LeoBurnett
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First time a poster has stopped me in my tracks for a while
The interplay of the hands and the copy is tremendous
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It’s my favourite dinosaur again… 😁🦕
#GrammarHumour #LanguageLove
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It really annoys me when people use the wrong word and don’t have the humidity to admit it
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You mean the internet? 😉
#GrammarHumour
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Breaking | The CPS have authorised criminal proceedings against X users that use ‘your’ incorrectly instead of ‘you’re’.
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Take a bow @MercedesBenz
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Harry Dry is the best copywriter I know.
He's built a 130,000-person newsletter teaching people how to do it, and by the end of this interview, you'll be at least a Green Belt in copywriting.
Some of his rules for writing:
1) A great sentence is a good sentence made shorter.
2) Writing great copy begins with having something to say in the first place.
3) Copy is like food. How it looks matters.
4) Since the look of copy matters so much, don't write copy in Google Docs. Write it in Figma (so you can write and design at the same time).
5) Kaplan's Law of Words: Any word that isn't working for you is working against you.
6) You know a paragraph is ready to ship when there's nothing left to remove. It's like a Jenga tower. The entire thing should collapse if you remove something.
7) Make a promise in the title so the reader knows exactly what they're going to get if they click. Then, deliver on the promise.
8) The three laws of copywriting: (1) Make it concrete, (2) make it visual, and (3) make it falsifiable.
9) Make it concrete: Don't be abstract. For an example, say you're writing about habits. Don't talk about "productive routines." That's abstract. Write about "waking up at 6am to write" instead. It's concrete — and much more vibrant.
10) Make it visual: People see in pictures. This is why instead of memorizing card numbers directly, world memory champions memorize cards by turning them into pictures and then back to cards.
11) Make it falsifiable: When you write a sentence that's true or false, you put your head on the chopping block, which makes people sit up in their seat.
12) When has a falsifiable statement resonated? Galileo got sentenced to a decade of house arrest for saying that the earth spins around the sun. That's a falsifiable sentence. But nobody would've done anything if he'd said that the earth has a harmonious connection with a celestial object.
13) Write with the delete key. Using fewer words lets you be more impactful with the words you keep.
14) The job of a sales page is to make a bold claim at the top. Then spend the rest of the page backing up what you've said... with a ridiculous amount of proof.
15) If your competitor could've written the sentence, cut it.
16) Good copy is differentiated. Here's an example: Elon Musk shouldn't write "The Cybertruck is the world's best truck." Ford or Dodge can write that sentence. But only Elon can write: "The Cybertruck is tougher than an F-150 and faster than a Porsche."
17) Some days, the writing comes easily. Some days, it takes sweat. The reader doesn't care if you wrote for two minutes, two hours, or two days. The ink looks the same.
18) Great copy reads like your customer wrote it. Talk to them.
That's just an introduction to the copywriting philosophy of @harrydry.
I've shared the full interview below. I recommend you watch this one because we pull from so many visual references and do a lot of screen sharing. If you'd rather watch on YouTube, I've shared the link in the reply tweets.































