
I help copywriters & businesses create sales copy that works. Started at David Ogilvy’s ad agency on Madison Ave. Went on to sell over $1B via direct response.
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The "secrets" of my success...
1. Starting at Ogilvy and getting a first-class introduction to "Madison Avenue" ad agency advertising (it's where I learned to balance great creativity with great salesmanship)
2. Working on direct response for super-savvy clients like Boardroom/Bottom Line, Rodale, Agora, Procter & Gamble, and so many others — and constantly seeing the results of my efforts
3. Teaming up with great writers and seeing how they work, getting their critiques, and picking their brains — including Jim Rutz, Jim Punkre, Dan Rosenthal, and John Carlton
4. Competing against great writers, which forced me to constantly up my game
5. Working on many different types of projects, from traditional radio and TV commercials and print ads to direct mail, infomercials, VSLs, online ads, and online sales pages (not to mention a few jingles)
6. Working on an incredibly wide variety of products and services — from toilet cleaner and laundry detergent to industrial o-rings to $20,000 high-end seminars
7. Getting exposure to hundreds of different markets and niches, where I learned the best practices of each
8. Having been at this for awhile
The key to good copywriting is to think of the prospect as a friend you want to help, rather than a prospect you want to sell.
One of the things that means is that you don't order the prospect around like a drill sergeant, with phrases such as "Click here now" or "Don't delay."
Instead, give the prospect the opportunity to take action.
Make your copy more like a wedding invitation than a jury summons.
I'll show you how to do it in my latest article, linked in the first comment below...
Here's that article on giving prospects opportunities instead of orders:
substack.com/@ddeutsch/note/…
I'm about to release a free 5-day email course on how to improve any piece of sales copy.
If you're up for the challenge, I'm releasing it here first.
Link in the first comment to get started immediately.
Feedback welcome.
Here's the link to the free 5-day copy transformation challenge: SpeakingOfWriting.com/5day.
We're told to be ourselves when we write.
But which self?
Turns out, we're more than one.
And writing from a different persona can be an absolute game-changer.
An article I just published goes deep on why and how. (Link in first comment.)
The playwright and humorist George S. Kaufman wrote the script for one of the Marx Brothers' Broadway shows — not that the freewheeling Marx Brothers felt bound by it.
"Don't look now," mumbled a frustrated Kaufman to a friend backstage during one rehearsal, "but I think I just heard one of my original lines."
An entrepreneur I recently started coaching knows how he feels.
There was precious little left of his copy after we finished cutting and rebuilding.
It made me realize that, at least at first, most of what I teach about copywriting isn't techniques. I simply emphasize three things until they become second nature:
1. One action, one compelling reason — Be crystal clear on the one action you want the prospect to take and the single biggest, most relevant benefit of their doing so.
2. Prove your case beyond a shadow of a doubt — Make your argument so clear and airtight that your prospect could make the case to a friend or spouse.
3. Stop putting prospects to sleep — Swap out the boring parts for interesting stories, surprising facts, or warnings of change that will directly affect them.
Want to see how you and your copy would hold up to my tough-love coaching? Comment below or DM me and let's talk.
I've been thinking about how, in marketing, as in life, it all comes down to getting a response — whether that's a "yes," a "wow," a like or follow, an inquiry or purchase.
Unfortunately, with more and more people and companies clamoring for one, getting a response is harder than ever.
I've spent a few decades in the trenches of direct response, and put the essence of what I've learned about getting people to take action (including the five key elements of response) into my latest article.
Link in first comment...
Invariably, my best copy ideas come away from the computer, talking to people.
That's because there is no such thing as “copywriting.” There is only persuasion.
You know, that thing you do to convince others to do something.
So don’t “write copy.” Instead, imagine how you would convince friends or loved ones to say “yes” to whatever you’re offering, and put that on the page.
Better yet, go out and see if you can get people interested in what you’re offering. See where their eyes light up, their interest fades, their resistance flares.
The bots cannot do this.
Human vs AI copy. Enough debating.
I dug into the actual tests and data.
Turns out there is a clear winner. It surprised me—might surprise you, too.
Link to the full article in the first comment.
Full breakdown + framework on Substack: open.substack.com/pub/ddeuts…
If you need a reminder of how powerful words can be, grab a copy of The Language of the Soul by Mark Nepo.
From the back blurb: “Nepo explores the deep, often forgotten roots of 228 words from thirty-one languages and traditions, revealing their original, undiluted power to awaken, connect, and heal.”
Just a few minutes with it a day leaves me ready to take on the challenges of both world and page.
I once had lunch with a speechwriter for the governor of a large state.
He was fascinated with copywriting; I with speechwriting.
Turned out, we both simply persuaded with words. I to get people to buy; he to get people to vote, contribute, or agree.
One big difference: in everything he said, he had to keep in mind its effect on voters, legislators, state and national party leaders, donors, and members of the governor's own administration.
Although I've never written a speech for anyone else, I've studied it for years and own around a dozen books about it (including one highly technical tome that's considered the "bible" of speechwriting).
And I've found that there's one thing speechwriters do that every writer should know. Check it out in the first comment.
Here's that link to the article on the one thing speechwriters do that every writers should know: ddeutsch.substack.com/p/the-…
What makes some writing so irresistibly interesting?
Sociologist Murray Davis spent years studying this. And what he found was, fittingly, quite interesting.
People are drawn to ideas that refute what they believe.
One catch is, it must challenge something they care about. But not a belief they're welded to.
It's why headlines such as "How to build wealth by saving less" work so well. We believe you must save more to build wealth. But it looks like there's a way to get rich by actually saving LESS.
I'm interested!
If you'd like to know more, I just posted an article that breaks down exactly how to use this technique. (Link in the first comment below.)
Here's that full article on how to make your writing irresistably interesting: bit.ly/4vXuqFs
One of my most successful sales letters was headlined: “Treat Any Disease by Taking Advantage of Its Hidden Weakness.”
And I believe the main reason it worked so well was that it took something seemingly impossible and showed that it was plausible.
It’s what Walt Disney calls “the plausible impossible” principle. In cartoons it's when Donald Duck gets flattened by a steamroller and springs right back up.
In copy, it's when you make your audience go, "That's impossible! Or is it...?"
My latest article goes deeper, and even includes a guest appearance by Walt himself. (Link in the first comment.)
Here's a story I tell my students and clients who use AI to write copy…
I was once creative director for a direct response agency that hosted elaborate dinners for our clients. The president was particularly fussy about one thing: the water glasses. They could only be the finest crystal.
When I asked him why he would pay $150 per glass for high-end crystal, he gently tapped one of the empty glasses. It rang like a bell and seemed to want to go on vibrating forever.
“That’s why,” he said.
Test your copy — especially AI-assisted copy — the same way. Give it a tap by reading it aloud. Does it vibrate with life as if there’s clearly a living, breathing, feeling human behind it?
Or does it clunk like cheap glassware?





