Wielder of imagination.

Los Angeles, CA
Joined December 2008
When you run into a problem in your story, drill in rather than add on. What's a story problem you solved with the room you were already in?
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My wife's acting teacher, Fred Kareman: "It's never a fight; it's a miscommunication." Characters who yell to win are fireworks. Characters who are trying to be understood and keep missing are drama.
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The gods of Olympus. The knights of the Round Table. Storytelling keeps landing on twelve perspectives. Nov 11, I'm talking mythic archetypes with Christopher Vogler, tarynoneill and a room full of mythologists. Free, virtual, 6–8 PM PT. eventbrite.com/e/old-gods-ne…
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Every great story is a controlled demolition. The explosion is the fun part. Knowing exactly where to put the charges is the craft, and that's most of the twists-and-turns chapter in my book. amazon.com/dp/B0HFH83VJD
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The longer you sustain tension before release, the stronger the climax.
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Caveats are excuses.
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Stop Writing! hit #1 in all three of its Amazon categories. Didn't expect that. Finished it? A review helps for a first-time writer: a.co/d/0j2gOy7f
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Don't describe—evoke.
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When we shape our rhetoric, our rhetoric shapes us.
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Vivid verbs paint pictures with words.
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If you don't have a new take on an old trope, skip it.
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The most memorable stories are cathartic for the writer.
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Work that felt like play.
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You don't have a story until you have a personal connection to the material.
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We don't fall in love with looks—we fall in love with people.
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A marriage that grew sweeter, not just longer.
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The voice of a story should supersede the voice of a writer.
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They don't ask about your medium—they ask about your meaning.
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Stories without a distinct voice sound like they fell off an assembly line.
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Kindness given without a scorecard.
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