Giving away a free app audit every day! I’m new here, so this is my way of getting to know you and giving something back. Every day I’ll roast an app: onboarding + paywall, where the magic (money) happens. 💸 Drop your App Store link below and I’ll tell you what I’d fix first.

6 of my last 13 roasts had the same problem: the AI added stuff nobody needed 🙈 3 fonts, tiny text no one can read, pretty images that say nothing. For the AI, adding is easy. Your job is to remove. And if you need a hand with yours, just let me know 🙌🏼

Every morning a frog comes to my place, naps in the shade and leaves in the afternoon 🐸 I tell her every day that I hope she feels at home. Might sound silly, but seeing her makes my day every time 🥹

Part 2/3 🎥 Choosing a character is a super cute way to gamify 😍 But "Continue as guest" sits top right, where the Skip was. People expect it at the end of the screen, so put it under "Use email". And the "Not from zero" text is super small, hard to read

3. Screens that change the look and feel. Suddenly a light screen with different fonts (the 91% stat, then a review). It seems it popped up from somewhere else, and it takes me out of the app. And just one review feels kind of weird 🤔

Part 1/3 🎥 with subtitles, because I know you're not turning the sound on 😅 "Hi, I'm glad you are here" with the pet moving is nice, but it's not telling me anything. Show me what could create an impact, or it's just one more friction screen

2. Let's talk. Showing me how it works before asking me is interesting 👌 And the option to write is good, sometimes I don't want to speak. But there's a lot of text to remember before I tap the mic. Make it step by step and keep the chat style of the screen before

3. The rest of the screens. "It just works" is all that reads, and the screen wastes a lot of space. "Clean design" isn't the best to sell. A dashboard to level up is interesting, but dark & light mode won't make anyone choose the app 🤷‍♀️ Highlight the benefit, not the feature

Part 1/2 🎥 with subtitles, because I know you're not turning the sound on 😅 Start with keywords that aren't that hard to position, and grow with your users 🌱 Screenshot text counts too. And if "Track daily. Level up." matters to you, make it readable on a small screen

2. Screenshot 1. A grey phone on a grey screen, with a lot of dots that are hard to see from a distance. Show someone achieving results, it connects more emotionally 💪 Or make the habits pop: morning workout, reading, drinking water. So everyone gets what you're tracking 👀

4. The next screens. Too much text, out of context. The usual issue with apps built with AI 🤖 I felt my energy going down instead of feeling empowered. On Apple Health, "On device", "Read only" and "Your choice" look clickable, but they're not. I didn't trust it with my data

3. The stress reads. These cards look like options to pick, but they're not a selection. I kept tapping and nothing happened 🤔 And the images don't match the words: "High stress" is a pet that looks cozy 🧣 and "Elevated" is one watching the rain

Part 1/2 🎥 with subtitles, because I know you're not turning the sound on 😅 Keep things the way people understand them: "Continue" and an arrow means I keep going. Anything else and I might tap Skip 👀 Then a heartbeat screen right after I said I was okay: out of context

2. How are you feeling today? Just the question, I don't need the extra lines. The icons don't match the answers: how does a cloud relate to having a hard time? Faces would make more sense 🙂 And "That feels right" with a heart doesn't feel like a button. I felt stuck