#jackieshauna from my fic ‘spinning on that dizzy edge’ as depicted by @employedhamster who captured them so perfectly! tysm ham! they are so lovely and silly and also annoying and stupid let’s all contain multitudes
a trick with pacing is you can ‘cheat’ it, sentences physically take time to read and if you want there to be a pause between two lines just add another in the middle, elaborate on a thought, feeling etc. readers will feel that break in rhythm even without consciously realising
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baby jackieshauna #yellowjackets #jackieshauna
navy general’s daughter jackie stowing away with fishing jetty captain shauna not realising she was followed so the whole ship gets captured by pirates who are like we hear you have precious cargo and shauna is like my fish??? And then jackie pokes her head out like Hi
























