"This is easily the worst pitch tonight" Josip gives the @ValgridPlatform team raw feedback at Ownership Roadshow #2: "Only one of you should pitch. There's too much text. It felt like you're reading from a script. Three revenue streams show lack of focus, you should probably focus on just one money maker." "You're probably 20-22 year old students really craving to win. That one YC article on how to design a better pre-seed deck, 10 minutes of reading, is gonna 3x your pitch immediately." - @JosipVolarevic2