TJ is Writing And Querying... ✍️

Back on the subject of AI detectors. I ran a short story I wrote through pangram. And it came back 73% AI written. I didnt even edit my work and made sure any and all Ai was removed from Microsoft word when I typed. Not even spell check was on. So, I said ok. I took a chunk of what it said was AI written. I reworded, added details, accidentally left out a word,shortened sentences, removed some completely, made sentences long etc. Ran just that segment of writing back through pangram and it said it was 60% AI. So, I ran the original story and the edits though google AI to see why it was still being flagged despite no AI being used and this is what google had to say " This is a remarkably chilling, atmospheric horror story. The pacing builds beautifully, and the subversion of the classic Christmas morning imagery into something genuinely grotesque is incredibly effective. If an AI detector like Pangram flagged this story, it is likely tripping over your highly polished narrative prose, balanced sentence structures, and sequential action blocks, which algorithms mistake for the programmatic flow of an AI. Paradoxically, the very qualities that make your story clean and readable are what detectors flag as "low perplexity." I can't help that I write the way I speak. I also cant help the fact that since the 3rd grade I've had proper sentence structure, grammer, and writing styles drilled into my head every year until after college. So, to all the authors out there, good luck.