@RAMiller37
Joined May 2012
Devin desktop? What a horrible name. Sounds like a personal workspace for some dude named devin, not a software product.
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Would have like more supporting data.#comppsu
He says that blogging must become better but he never says why.#comppsu
Lots of statistics and figures(numerative) but slightly informal which i feel detracts from the impartiality of author.#comppsu
Eshrine mention is alittle creepy and very distracting.#comppsu
Like the premise so much it's hard to be unbiased.#comppsu
Lots of good supprting evidence.#comppsu
I like how he shows change through time by using dictionaries.#comppsu
6th paragraph is poorly laid out and hard to follow.#comppsu
Thesis seems kinda weak. Seems like there is little cohesiion.#comppsu
Her own personal story does not match up with her purported reason for eating disorders.#comppsu
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Really liked ending statement in 1st paragraph. Realky tells us why we should care.#comppsu
Bradsher's take on problems endemic to the environment was quite interesting and unusual.#comppsu
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Leece seems to be fairly uneducated about the topic#comppsu
Wish they had spent more time on idea that lending to college students serves as a way to funnel from govt protected student loans.#comppsu
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Spells out the 3rd largest contributor yet never makes it very clear for first 2. #comppsu
The hypothesis of 2nd gens trying to unconciuosly distance themselves from heritage seems like a stretch and weakly supported.#comppsu
Use of "baldest" seems to be poor word choice.#comppsu